Oh I am sorry I am not clear - it is all third person - I was referring to the 1st MC's POV, the 2nd MC's POV.... :) It is all in third person. It did start out in first person but I didn't change to third because of that bias. Especially in YA first person is adored. And some of my favorite adult fantasies are in first (Robin Hobb, Jacqueline Carey for instance).
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Clear as mud eh?